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I really appreciated the way you showed time changing in your piece. I also liked the way that you used dialogue to portray the emotions and fears you were navigating at the time. I suggest giving more details about your body language, internal thoughts, and emotions, rather than having the characters literally say how they are feeling.
I really appreciated the way you showed time changing in your piece. I also liked the way that you used dialogue to portray the emotions and fears you were navigating at the time. I suggest giving more details about your body language, internal thoughts, and emotions, rather than having the characters literally say how they are feeling.
-Naomi Weintraub